The feedback that surprised the most for me in the last elevator pitch was every comment was really positive about my product. Also people liked my short and to the point delivery. The one that stood out the most was someone pointed out that I tripped over my words at one point.
For this pitch, I tried to make it even more shorter and to the point. I focused on what the product was and who it was for. I also tried to trip over my words less.
Jason,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great idea on your hands here. I hate having 10,000 things in my pocket and having to lug all of it around with me. Your pitch was very quick and got the point across well. However, even though you received a lot of positive feedback, I would maybe go back and look at my old pitches to see if there is something I could find myself. This way, you can be sure that your pitch is amazing, rather than just good. Other than that, I think you did a really great job on delivery and you looked very professional. Please take a second to look at my blog post! Thanks, http://ufentlaurenday.blogspot.com/2016/03/growing-my-social-capital.html
Jason,
ReplyDeleteAs far as your delivery goes, if you trip over words the most important part is that you keep on going; which you did! Overall, you conveyed the idea behind your product, how you might strategize selling it, and why its beneficial! Solid pitch my man.
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